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Free verse № 5271

oops

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

i think my memory might be things tattooed on my brain over time the colors fade and lines blur and meld with other lines i piss people off by asking them if they remember parties they weren't invited to

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mean 6.50 weighted 5.40 rank 3111 views 146 View voting details →

6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

3 comments

[8] -=SeTTle=- 30-Jul-02/8:39 PM Reply
good one
[4] ben 24-Aug-02/9:18 AM Reply
me too- 4/10
[7] crooked_smile 9-Mar-05/4:01 PM Reply
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate!

without that it would be a 5
with that change more of a 9

ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7

-lia