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Nitro (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
I absorb your negativity Only to find myself consumed by it One long life lived with you Many happier days without you Today I felt the regret An emotion I wished I never felt In your eyes I see chaos Your voice fills my heart with ruthless hate So many days gone to waste Never did I feel whole more than one day Close my eyes only to continually realize You will never die You didn’t make me see You made me think I saw I saw nothing but your paranoid aversion for structure Your lack of self control which poisoned me for so long You raped my mind of individuality Feeding me corrupted influences of non existent free will Listen vigilantly to my decision You are hate in its purest form Loving you was like sending my soul to the depths of hell Forget the spelling of my name Overlook my existence You are not welcome to breathe in my zone Die and stay dead in your delusional fantasy world

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.8847394
Overall Rank: 9928
Posted: September 9, 2003 1:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 11:02 AM PDT
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[0] Nitroxide @ 68.10.211.74 | 23-Nov-03/3:47 PM | Reply
LOL...i raped you of individuality...hahaha...you dint even know who the hell you were when i met you.You were a lost rocker in a thug life world and i freed you i opened you mind to eternal possibilities that you couldnt even grasp.A dark prince came into your world and has clouded your vision,maybe thats why all your other poems are so bleak and dark you need to clear your self from that storm.

I will always be the dandy in your ghetto with a snowhite smile...

and i wouldnt dare breath in your new zone for it is tainted with the pale scent of your infidelity...

ofcourse there is chaos in my eyes but what is wrong with chaos remember the principle of Anarchy...There must be chaos for order.

i had self control not to cheat and run away from little problems...and i did let you see...its just this new veil you wear that wont allow you breath or see,or maybe it lets you breath to much and look were that leads...*Cough*...i wont say it.

I will NEVER DIE i will live always in your heart and you cannot deny that for i run through you...

[7] whispern_smoke_wisp @ 205.188.116.135 | 9-Mar-05/3:49 PM | Reply
a tad to cliche to be really good
-zarina
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