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Nitro (Free verse) by NNirvana13666 I absorb your negativity
Only to find myself consumed by it
One long life lived with you
Many happier days without you
Today I felt the regret
An emotion I wished I never felt
In your eyes I see chaos
Your voice fills my heart with ruthless hate
So many days gone to waste
Never did I feel whole more than one day
Close my eyes only to continually realize
You will never die
You didnât make me see
You made me think I saw
I saw nothing but your paranoid aversion for structure
Your lack of self control which poisoned me for so long
You raped my mind of individuality
Feeding me corrupted influences of non existent free will
Listen vigilantly to my decision
You are hate in its purest form
Loving you was like sending my soul to the depths of hell
Forget the spelling of my name
Overlook my existence
You are not welcome to breathe in my zone
Die and stay dead in your delusional fantasy world
Up the ladder:
Final Comment
Down the ladder:
Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss
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Posted: September 9, 2003 1:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 11:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8847394 Overall Rank: 9930 Comments:
a tad to cliche to be really good
-zarina 178 view(s)
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I will always be the dandy in your ghetto with a snowhite smile...
and i wouldnt dare breath in your new zone for it is tainted with the pale scent of your infidelity...
ofcourse there is chaos in my eyes but what is wrong with chaos remember the principle of Anarchy...There must be chaos for order.
i had self control not to cheat and run away from little problems...and i did let you see...its just this new veil you wear that wont allow you breath or see,or maybe it lets you breath to much and look were that leads...*Cough*...i wont say it.
I will NEVER DIE i will live always in your heart and you cannot deny that for i run through you...