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MR Blobby on Tattooed by DR Limerick 25 Jun 2004, 10:28 AM
BLOBBY BLOBBY
horus8 on some deleted poem 25 Jun 2004, 4:59 PM
Shut up, fucking chew toy.
Shardik on Stuffy by horus8 25 Jun 2004, 5:52 PM
"You're the salesman, you make sales."
boldsilence on ILLusion in Falsity by Sugar Victim 25 Jun 2004, 6:27 PM
I like this. It's harsh and blunt, but I like that it's straight-forward. The rhymes don't really distract the reader eithre, especially at the end. At the beginning, they were kind of shoddy, but it's okay, because the poem was good. I really enjoyed this. I hope to see another one like it... -Nichole- P.S. - I'd appreciate it if you'd take a look at one of my poems too.
boldsilence on Nothing by psikosis 25 Jun 2004, 6:28 PM
Very true...
boldsilence on There was . . . by baphomet 25 Jun 2004, 6:32 PM
I don't like the form this was written in at all. It makes it seem unlike poetry. If you had just written it in a different form, I think that would have made it a lot better. My rating won't reflect that, though. Just for future reference. -Nichole- P.S. - I'd appreciate it if you'd read and review one of my poems in return.
Dovina on Absolution by Drunk Russian Poet 25 Jun 2004, 9:29 AM
I take it as a kind of priestly advice for gaining "Absolution" for having committed the perceived sin af adultry, advising the woman to tell her child his breeding. She questions whether to tell, apparently because of guilt feelings. The last verse is provocatively ambiguous because we don't know whether the "ears" are the child's or the world's. Good.
MR Blobby on Center Of The Universe by Dovina 25 Jun 2004, 10:21 AM
Blobby blob
MR Blobby on Sustained by Dovina 25 Jun 2004, 10:22 AM
blob blobby blob
DR Limerick on some deleted poem 25 Jun 2004, 10:32 AM
Yar dis ist a goot limerick take two a day thats vot i say!!
moonlightdance on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> 25 Jun 2004, 12:35 PM
the beautiful thing about the english language is that it is so diversified and evolving. poem can easily be one syllable or two. i don't see the big issue here, though i am rooting for two, just because it's funnier. also amelia: two syllables or three?
moonlightdance on Loving You More Each Day by Katrina 25 Jun 2004, 12:38 PM
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
Dovina on Someday Soon by Drunk Russian Poet 25 Jun 2004, 3:36 PM
A mysterious kinda thing, I won't even say all the interpretations it could have or the problems with them. Let it be for the intuition.
boldsilence on Mother by jacqui 25 Jun 2004, 3:47 PM
interesting...
markmarkmarkmark on Love poem (on sense and experience) by thavimatola 25 Jun 2004, 4:23 PM
Lots of good things here - just needs a touch more to hold it together for me.
markmarkmarkmark on deep by bxjay170 25 Jun 2004, 4:25 PM
spelling and grammar aren't what poetry is about, but the lack of them distracts from the message. All that aside, I could see the feeling behind this. Avoid cliche - deeper _than_ the sea, is not a fresh image.
horus8 on some deleted poem 25 Jun 2004, 4:46 PM
smegma
horus8 on Tattooed by DR Limerick 25 Jun 2004, 4:47 PM
Fickle Cocca 10!
horus8 on Someday Soon by Drunk Russian Poet 25 Jun 2004, 4:48 PM
"breaks upon his face" WARM... I bet. poop. pull out your chisel and fez.
horus8 on some deleted poem 25 Jun 2004, 4:55 PM
A stretch of spunk from afar took out the right wheel of my car 'n Sent my asswagon a soar 'ver the sheep that I shored that's going to sure leave a scar