deep

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

how deep can my deep love be its so deep when i think of you i can't sleep its so deep i cant eat or speak you say my love's not real,but its deeper then sea dam can't you see what u do to me its with you i only wonna be your name is branded on my heart even if we are so far apart but our love doesnt have a end because everyday a new and stronger one starts you give me 100% satisfaction i shouldnt say no more words cause love is not demostrated by words but by actions since you left my life's no longer clear its full of confusion and static

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[3] markmarkmarkmark 25-Jun-04/4:25 PM Reply

spelling and grammar aren't what poetry is about, but the lack of them distracts from the message. All that aside, I could see the feeling behind this. Avoid cliche - deeper _than_ the sea, is not a fresh image.