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Bliss Eternal (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 Can I be your love?
For you are my life
Every thought dwells
On you
Every breath wakeful
To the memories of us
Let's just disappear
To a place of comfort
And know the love
Of which I only find in you
I melt in your arms
You my gaurdian,
My life
Up the ladder:
.......
Down the ladder:
deep
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Posted: January 1, 2003 9:32 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:49 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.523188 Overall Rank: 12759 Comments:
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cobalt @ 67.84.171.238
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1-Jan-03/9:58 PM
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that's harsh. if only you could just get love when you needed it. damn it just don't work that way.
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129
> cobalt
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1-Jan-03/11:54 PM
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hey there you should email me some time...
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> Freethinker1602
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6-Jan-03/11:14 AM
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GLADE.
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very pretty.
good poem i like it its great
it reminds me of great times i had :)
exculpate at once, then sand your left leg to varnish with 150 grain paper. surfing trip to costa rica also work wonders. if this is true, good. if not, you should move to italy, and become an aids activist. seriously. my friend just got out of the peace corp, and i watched him turn a loaf of bread into a hovercraft complete with a banquet of swine spitted goodies and sani huts..truly..it was fucking mind boggling, but as luck would have it's always about 'pork' no 'copper'. maybe he should try a mracle were he turn a pillow case full of euro's into a vat of mercury, than we'll sell the mercury for hard cash for venezualain oil and thirteen year old hookers. whatta ya think. too cryptic? yeah, probably.
this is soooo beautiful lol ^_^ hey mbe l8er we can get together?? ok asl
What are you doing to me!? I feel tired and weak.... You're draining my Life Force, aren't you!? Curse you, Psi~Vamp!
Lose the damn explaining paragraph. No one gives a damn, sweetheart.
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