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Bliss Eternal (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Can I be your love? For you are my life Every thought dwells On you Every breath wakeful To the memories of us Let's just disappear To a place of comfort And know the love Of which I only find in you I melt in your arms You my gaurdian, My life

ChunkyHunkyMonkey 2-Jan-03/5:22 PM
good poem i like it its great
it reminds me of great times i had :)




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