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Loving You More Each Day (Acrostic) by Katrina
Looking into your eyes each morning Ordinary days with extraordinary nights Vasking on our past and looking forward to our future Imparting on a new adventure together you and I Never knowing what may come and still willing risk going on Giving more of myself to you each day Yerning for you when you are not there Outstandingly understanding even when I mess up Understanding when I need you the most Most of all shows love when I need love Obsolete in character because noone is quit like you Respectful to everyone you meet Everything seems to be so perfect Each detail in place Anything Im missing I do not think Counting the ways you have maid my life better Having to stop and catch my breath everytime you kiss me Daydreaming about the future we will have All the things mentioned here is how I feel about you You and you alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.769231
Weighted score: 5.5623527
Overall Rank: 2443
Posted: May 22, 2004 9:01 PM PDT; Last modified: May 22, 2004 9:15 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 23-May-04/5:14 AM | Reply
This is amazing... you must really know what its like to be in love when noone understands you... you put it so perfectly... dont listen to what anyone else tells you, you have a gift and you should never stop writing... 10...
[8] moonlightdance @ 69.134.115.231 | 25-Jun-04/12:38 PM | Reply
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
[9] TearsOnRoses @ 66.73.129.137 | 12-Aug-04/9:36 PM | Reply
Beautiful poem. A few spelling mistakes but good work.
-Megan-
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