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Loving You More Each Day (Acrostic) by Katrina

Looking into your eyes each morning Ordinary days with extraordinary nights Vasking on our past and looking forward to our future Imparting on a new adventure together you and I Never knowing what may come and still willing risk going on Giving more of myself to you each day Yerning for you when you are not there Outstandingly understanding even when I mess up Understanding when I need you the most Most of all shows love when I need love Obsolete in character because noone is quit like you Respectful to everyone you meet Everything seems to be so perfect Each detail in place Anything Im missing I do not think Counting the ways you have maid my life better Having to stop and catch my breath everytime you kiss me Daydreaming about the future we will have All the things mentioned here is how I feel about you You and you alone

moonlightdance 25-Jun-04/12:38 PM
normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love




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