regarding some deleted poem...	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:00 AM
Weird. But OK really. I love these dialect pieces from OOOOP NORTH LOIK>
Re: Kennedy the cunt by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:03 AM
Very fucking funny! My best laugh since 9/11 when I shat myself with joy.
Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:04 AM
You are right, he is a cunt for a' that.
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:05 AM
Very profound
Re: Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:09 AM
You are right that Jesus doesn't care. Maybe you'd be a bit of selfish cunt like him if you'd been nailed up by a load of wops.
Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:12 AM
I love this more than 9/11.
Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:14 AM
I just re-read this. Only just.
Re: Strap On by Shardik	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:18 AM
Fucking incomprehensible! I loved it!
Re: Some die waiting, or laugh forgetting by Shardik	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:19 AM
I wept more at this than when I got my bollocks caught in my zip.
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.239.13	7-Oct-07/10:20 AM
How fucking sad.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 66.215.80.177	7-Oct-07/7:01 PM
I love most of this and only wish you'd swing the rest of it over to its tender majority. "like Christ on electrodes" seems too distant from the theme to work as metaphor. "Shrapnel" also feels too sharp for such tender feelings.
Re: Under The Knife by PoetryIsDead	Dovina 66.215.80.177	7-Oct-07/7:09 PM
too involved for haiku, I think. But the last line is clever.
Re: I Hope by BrandonW	Dovina 66.215.80.177	7-Oct-07/7:15 PM
A good theme and mostly well executed. The rhymes seem more distraction than poetry. and "I hope" at the end adds what?
Re: Rooster Rape by Dovina	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:55 AM
Fabulous first couplet rhyme! Henhouse and house! Genius! The rest of it is rubbish. The funniest thing since 9/11.
Re: 'Till Then by sliver	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:56 AM
Sentimental and sloppy in the extreme.
Re: Butterfield, Minn. Tommy's farm 1993 by Bachus	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:57 AM
Ungrammatical first stanza. You must have been off school the day they taught sentences.
Re: Bitter by Ranger	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:58 AM
Charmingly archaic.
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:58 AM
Longwinded.
Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco	Engelbert Humpalot 85.211.244.15	8-Oct-07/6:59 AM
Good last stanza. Best just to shag her and bugger off.
Re: A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	9-Oct-07/1:20 PM
Cute.