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Under The Knife (Haiku) by PoetryIsDead i lie here naked
littered in these Sharpie marks
awaiting rebirth.
Up the ladder:
you & you all congregators
Down the ladder:
Shadow
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Posted: October 5, 2007 4:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2007 4:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8077 Comments:
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Dovina @ 66.215.80.177
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7-Oct-07/7:09 PM
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too involved for haiku, I think. But the last line is clever.
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