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Under The Knife (Haiku) by PoetryIsDead
i lie here naked littered in these Sharpie marks awaiting rebirth.
Up the ladder: Ode to the bun (Day 11)
Down the ladder: Not Allowed
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8078
Posted: October 5, 2007 4:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2007 4:07 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 66.215.80.177 | 7-Oct-07/7:09 PM | Reply
too involved for haiku, I think. But the last line is clever.
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