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Ode to the bun (Day 11) (Free verse) by jdc Sitting with such stoic dignity
Amidst judging sidelong glances
Deaf to the sniggers and jibes
It refuses to rise up.
Even in its death there is life
Abundant, teeming, hardly acceptable
Yet it is still life
Rotting raisins and all
Proudly accepted and loved
Just as it is
I âm starting to admire that rotten bun
Up the ladder:
Rolling Bells
Down the ladder:
Under The Knife
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Posted: July 15, 2004 9:35 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2004 9:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8077 Comments:
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edwardo @ 161.184.67.196
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15-Jul-04/10:22 PM
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*sob* beautiful *sniff* just beautiful.
Thanks for the heartfelt sentiment, touching really,sniff * and all for Poetry day today in little ol NZ
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