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Ode to the bun (Day 11) (Free verse) by jdc

Sitting with such stoic dignity Amidst judging sidelong glances Deaf to the sniggers and jibes It refuses to rise up. Even in its death there is life Abundant, teeming, hardly acceptable Yet it is still life Rotting raisins and all Proudly accepted and loved Just as it is I ‘m starting to admire that rotten bun

jdc 15-Jul-04/11:16 PM
Thanks for the heartfelt sentiment, touching really,sniff * and all for Poetry day today in little ol NZ




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