Free verse № 153905
Rooster Rape
Our rooster owned the henhouse
we never gave the house
I closed the wire gate behind
and entered his domain
Shiny feathers ruffled
cocky head raised tall
cocked eye on the intruder
pomp of sound and strut
I went about the chores
of mending fence and post
The bird-eye never left me
as if sizing up a threat
I forgot him for a moment
abandoned watchful glance
He must have read my gender
for my man, he never touched
Without a vocal whisper
I heard the rush of wings
could have passed for angelâs
gentle breeze around my ears
He flew important mission
not mild, but boldly militant
as angels sometimes are
planted talons in my back
to which I swung around
and meant to kill with hammer blow
but he was gone by then
his proud head standing tall
Comes a moment in a story poem
where news is done and culminates
ends subtly, deft, or bluntly
and a moral should appear
A careful poet uses lighter fingers
places ferns beneath coniferous trees
understory to some curious acts
of a raucous maddening cock
applied to other kinds of life
as poet changes modes:
discovery by Copernicus
to Galileoâs sense
The mystery and the enterprise
for which this rooster lives
and why he fought a larger hen
or did he want to mate
11 comments
I like this but it's too heavy. I'll get back to it though. first read/8
Shiney feathers, eye on intruder, pomp of sound and strut, Keep those. The house /henhouse thing is confusing. Forgot and abandoned are the same,I prefer abandoned. Read mmy gender for my man? Huh?
Boldly militant as angels- I prefer over mission.
The rest is just too wordy, I think. Keep the Copernicus stuff. I think it gives just the right amount of ambiguity. Not sure you need the last line.
I'm a little strained for time, sorry. Next time, when the rooster attacks, use a nine-iron. ;)
How is the house/henhouse thing confusing? He owned the henhouse and would have owned the house too, if we had allowed it.
Wow, You wonât even allow me a bit of cadence with âI forgot him for a moment / abandoned watchful glance.â Too wordy? A hard taskmaster you. A rooster on my back.
I thought the last line was hilariously funny, and you simply frown â a comedianâs worst outcome.
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