Re: Bitter by Ranger	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/3:34 PM
I love the way you repeat the lines but add something different afterwards! ALso, This poem makes the reader feel the narator's emotions. Love the Poem!
Re: My first wish and last by Bachus	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:06 PM
Well Put together! Love it!
Re: You are a divider by Bachus	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:07 PM
WOW!!! Imagery is effective!
Re: Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:12 PM
The feeling of the poem is expressed well! Good Job!
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:15 PM
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
Re: This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 65.79.158.70	9-Oct-07/11:37 PM
my main point in this poem isn't just my physical appearance., nor is it an ego issue.. It's what people perceive of me. I am physically all these things but that's only what is seen. When in reality there is more to me then just a pretty face and nice body... maybe if you all weren't so narrow-minded you would have caught that in the last couple of lines. My peotic style will not be yours; neither will my personality be governed by your opinions of me.
Re: union with the eternal love by Prince of Void	alvinb 121.54.96.18	10-Oct-07/3:19 AM
just voting
regarding some deleted poem...	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	10-Oct-07/11:32 AM
I do not even know what to say about this one!
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	Skamper 58.171.31.190	13-Oct-07/9:28 PM
this is very bland - you need to drop such overused phrases and take what is in your head and write it in your own words...don't worry about what other people rate your work, it's not that important...honestly you seem to want to play to the masses instead of just playing.
regarding some deleted poem...	Skamper 58.171.30.194	13-Oct-07/9:31 PM
yes-yes...neatly done, opens up the mind and closes the mouth
Re: The Devil and I by forsaken	Skamper 58.171.59.184	13-Oct-07/9:34 PM
disjointed and lacking any kind of rhythm I could find (maybe just my two left brains)
regarding some deleted poem...	Skamper 58.171.25.4	13-Oct-07/9:42 PM
like is used too many times for such a short piece. the first and last versus could do without it. life sliding compared to tyre dust is creative...dust always seems to conjure images of swirling, and alike. Your sliding dust across the truck stop is spot on.
Re: back o' the fridge by nypoet22	Skamper 58.171.36.131	13-Oct-07/9:43 PM
as natural as a dancer...loved it
Re: Solstice, 2007 by lectricprincess	Skamper 58.171.12.106	13-Oct-07/9:47 PM
a pure pleasure to read -
Re: inside the raven by PsydewaysTears	Skamper 58.171.56.222	14-Oct-07/7:53 PM
nice work - lurking evil in a gently lulling tune... always the trap. :)
Re: RAGTIME by xyz	Skamper 58.171.7.35	14-Oct-07/7:57 PM
why don't you just throw stones at her - pull her hair and maybe snap her bra-strap. then she'll know you really like her
Re: Wait To Answer by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	15-Oct-07/9:23 AM
Your not serious are you? If this were a "romantic pimple" I'd give this a ten, but it's been labeled as free verse, so here is a zero. By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
Re: SEX (II) by blkarak	secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189	15-Oct-07/11:51 PM
I'm jealous of you... for once I experienced this with the love of my life... but now he's gone and I fear he will never come back. I miss it...
Re: Losing you by forsaken	secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189	16-Oct-07/12:00 AM
The last two lines really get me...
Re: Be The One by forsaken	secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189	16-Oct-07/12:04 AM
I hope you share this with teh woman it's all about.. I dont see how she could not want to be with you...