Re: I love you by jerzeygirl22	secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189	16-Oct-07/12:06 AM
I know exactly how you feel
Re: Jesus by Sing4Jesus!	some deleted user 207.191.187.20	16-Oct-07/9:24 AM
IDONT GET THIS POEM IS WONDERFUL. Y DONT PEOPLE LIKE IT..
Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable	some deleted user 207.191.187.20	16-Oct-07/9:28 AM
THAT IS SO SAD. I KNDA KNOW WHAT U ARE TALKING ABOUT . IT HAPPENS TO ALOT OF PEOPLE I GUESS.
Re: Alice to Slumber by Skamper	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	16-Oct-07/2:56 PM
zoiks.
Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	16-Oct-07/3:07 PM
The poems gives a good vision of the mother and her children.
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.68.121	17-Oct-07/12:45 AM
The word "separate" is the strongest word in this poem, thank you. Cheers and beers, and welcome to Area 6, secret hideout.
Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT	T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.68.121	17-Oct-07/12:47 AM
A slice of time. A 17 calorie slice of time, a thin, carbohydrate-free slice of time. A trans-fat free, utterly nutritionally void slice of time. ~10~
regarding some deleted poem...	T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.68.121	17-Oct-07/12:48 AM
smells like a cigarette, reads like a dream ~9~
Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT	Caducus 80.229.129.138	17-Oct-07/1:34 AM
Sweet. The seperation of adult responsibility and childhood innocence all linked by flesh until the teddy is subtle yet leaves me wanting those good ole 'stand by me' river phoenix days back.
Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:36 AM
too many words
Re: Wayne, do you? by T. Jonathron Remp	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:38 AM
either a 8 or a 1 ....dunno .... say 5 .... involving, though ... make that 6
Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:44 AM
.... er ... perp or victim ? ( or do you consider yourself both ?) ... nul points ... for the poem alone, that is
Re: Unmistakably Mistaken by secretlyvulnerable	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:45 AM
juvenile ... still, can't knock you for your years
Re: Alice to Slumber by Skamper	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:48 AM
scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius
Re: This Song by MacFrantic	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:51 AM
cop-out saying it's for someone else .... good story tho
Re: RAGTIME by xyz	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:52 AM
grow up
Re: inside the raven by PsydewaysTears	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:53 AM
don't he though
Re: Holding You by forsaken	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:54 AM
shows promise
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:56 AM
too many words
Re: The Devil and I by forsaken	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:59 AM
re-write once the devil has gone and note the difference