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Death of a Drug Addict (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
I want the cold, the deep cold coming from the cold warmth of the needle in the fucking vein, watching traffic zoom by and nothingness embracing everything like God looking down on ants and reflecting the genius of flies all over my goddamn carcass rose blossom in the chamber and super nova of emptiness coming finally in the blood stream and the lost urge to scream calmed calmed traffic zooming, children laughing Jesus is laughing too he doesn't hug me doesn't know me doesn't fucking care and neither do I.

Up the ladder: B.F.
Down the ladder: Tainted Sky

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.1
Overall Rank: 6021
Posted: September 20, 2007 4:12 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2007 4:12 PM PDT
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[9] Skamper @ 58.171.39.48 | 25-Sep-07/10:35 PM | Reply
damn sad
[9] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254 | 29-Sep-07/9:24 AM | Reply
Rose blossom of a bullet as it opens while travelling !
Awesome. Just awesome.
[6] Engelbert Humpalot @ 85.211.239.13 | 7-Oct-07/10:09 AM | Reply
You are right that Jesus doesn't care. Maybe you'd be a bit of selfish cunt like him if you'd been nailed up by a load of wops.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 130.65.109.104 > Engelbert Humpalot | 9-Oct-07/1:17 PM | Reply
You are stupid to assume that the young man of the poem is me, you twit.

Also, I am a selfish asshole... not cunt mind you, that's a term I tend to reserve for women and queer folk such as yourself.

Wops? You mean Romans? Romans and actual modern Italians are different; from what I remember of the Bible, the Jews were the ones that decided upon his crucifixion, the Romans simply carried it out.

Toodles shithead.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.254.47 | 28-Feb-08/6:59 AM | Reply
You are not fit to breathe. The only website where the horsedung you excrete might be found amusing is http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum where everyone else is also a total cunt.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 130.65.109.104 > Edna Sweetlove | 12-Mar-08/3:12 PM | Reply
Transexual dykes such as yourself make it difficult for anyone to breathe, you ugly, pretentious, pompous wench.
[n/a] Kamikaze @ 75.11.190.59 > Edna Sweetlove | 11-Jul-08/2:59 PM | Reply
THIS from the author of "Limp Cock"?
[8] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.83.157.120 | 29-Jul-08/8:32 PM | Reply
This is good. Dark, ominous, filled with moist character. It hit me hard.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 76.254.27.93 > T. Jonathron Remp | 29-Jul-08/9:11 PM | Reply
I was inspired when I went to Portland.... needless to say there's alot of heroin junkies there.
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