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Death of a Drug Addict (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer I want the cold, the deep cold
coming from the cold warmth of
the needle in the fucking vein,
watching traffic zoom by and nothingness
embracing everything like
God looking down on ants and reflecting the genius of
flies all over my goddamn carcass
rose blossom in the chamber and
super nova of emptiness coming finally
in the blood stream and
the lost urge to scream calmed
calmed
traffic zooming, children laughing
Jesus is laughing too
he doesn't hug me
doesn't know me
doesn't fucking care
and neither do I.
Up the ladder:
Sir Psycho Sexy
Down the ladder:
Tainted Sky
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Posted: September 20, 2007 4:12 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2007 4:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1 Overall Rank: 6068 Comments:
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Skamper @ 58.171.39.48
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25-Sep-07/10:35 PM
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damn sad
Rose blossom of a bullet as it opens while travelling !
Awesome. Just awesome.
You are right that Jesus doesn't care. Maybe you'd be a bit of selfish cunt like him if you'd been nailed up by a load of wops.
You are stupid to assume that the young man of the poem is me, you twit.
Also, I am a selfish asshole... not cunt mind you, that's a term I tend to reserve for women and queer folk such as yourself. Wops? You mean Romans? Romans and actual modern Italians are different; from what I remember of the Bible, the Jews were the ones that decided upon his crucifixion, the Romans simply carried it out. Toodles shithead.
You are not fit to breathe. The only website where the horsedung you excrete might be found amusing is http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum where everyone else is also a total cunt.
Transexual dykes such as yourself make it difficult for anyone to breathe, you ugly, pretentious, pompous wench.
THIS from the author of "Limp Cock"?
This is good. Dark, ominous, filled with moist character. It hit me hard.
I was inspired when I went to Portland.... needless to say there's alot of heroin junkies there.
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