some deleted user
on blockbuster by bondjedi
3 Aug 2004, 7:53 AM
Boo!
No.
*vomit*
I hate him already.
No, you really suck ass. Really.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2004, 7:45 AM
A tribute to -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
you know how to play with your words here...
Hah hah hah; real fucking funny. Seriously.
i have a penchant for mythology... so, this one got in my good book... not to mention, it was smoothly done... as most of your other works...
Oh watch out its captain melodic black metal and his army of evil keyboards
some deleted user
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
3 Aug 2004, 7:52 AM
Funny, jackass. Is that iambic pentameter? 9.
It sucks; I hate it. But if it's any consolation, the title was just as shitty as the poem.
Woah!
I posted this before I crashed for the night and wake up to - yikes - seven votes? And some very nice comments too.
Thanks!!
purty kewl.
Ah, that's so sad. On the verge of tears, are we? Maybe if you swear more and make more empty threats about killing people you'll feel more like a man. 0.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2004, 7:28 AM
This poem sucks. What the hell is this guy thinking? And what's a ghazal?
"A lot" is 2 words, and L3 is 4 sylables.
I totally feel you here, but you know I thought it was about a parent...you are funny. Your poems are very direct.
Since you are 16 I like this, because I appreciate the feelings it give me, I like that you can look at things that happen in life (even the stuff that's bad, but isn't it all about perspective) with a sense of humour...some people are 35 and don't get that.
You intrigue me, feline. Some help.
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i