i like this -mega

There's a party in my pants tonight, and everyone's invited. I hope your all excited?

Damn.. these things are vague.. but gives you that warm toasted feeling like marshmallows left in the sun.. 10

just savor it, Dreamer... it may or may not come back.. but, hey, there still AIDS.. 10 as always

i like this -mega

Never give up. God's got sumpthang, etc. -8-

The weeping mumbles of he who is stricken with writers block...

cute.

I like a good song and hate to complain in the middle of a hill-billy gittin-back-tagether tune, but if you remember all this in Verse 1, why don't you remember any of it in Verse 3? An' ain't it presumptious of y'all askin' her ta cancel her New Years plans and all. You'uns stay with us, hear. It ain't all that bad.

Not funny or clever? So what is this? Just lame.

fleck.

This is a joke,right? If not please seek help - Such as english 101 or some kind of therapy.

Do your parents know your posting this crap?

You poor fucker. Get over it pussy! Oh,and your poem sucks big black panther nuts.

Yawn

haha.. anything with the devil in it deserves more than a ten... but, alas, we only have up to ten and the devil doesn't exist... life is unfair

Love it, I'd forgot I'd written it until you dug it up from my xanga. Now its the become a short story Idea. Thanks. <3 Jason

Dear God, please don't let the tear swell... Christ you should be mugged and beaten.

Very funny.

Very funny little poem. I like the second stanza a lot more than the first and I think it could stand alone. It's very cute.