Ambitious, but ultimately found lacking. Take smaller bites, little dabs of mustard, and eventually the sandwhich becomes whole. (If that makes any sense... *shrug*) Blessed with three.

Doesn't make sense.

That's not nice!

Being as this is the second poem I've read today called "Life", I can't, just can't. First, you need to learn to proofread, or at least you spellcheck. Then, try writing about something else. All this positivity is a bad thing to be posting here. If you're going to be positive, at least mask it. ;) On the plus side, you have a great chance of making it onto -=D_A=-'s Love/Above Liste. Congrats.

Some misspelling, Your metre is off also. Just a word or two omitted or added in places may help some.While I admit compromise does often help, there are times when you absolutely cannot give on an issue.

This is the most perfect discription of my life I have ever read. Wow.

Do you consider yourself a feminist? I say again, this isn't bad. But questionably feminist, if that.

Were your heroes cows? Yes, they have.

The apples took me by surprise. Don't know why.

Utter hogwash.

Nonsense.

Its been a while but hope you guys are doing fine - Cheers ShaNoN

I'm not going to be picky about changing a couple of words and not repeating theline exactly. It's really one of your best. I wish you'd spend a little more time writing and a little less time drying to be -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I., Jr., but it's ok.

I'm not going to vote on this because it's just plain fuckin' mean. All that aside, though, it's pretty good. hehe

Simple, pleasing.

Must be a terrible thirst!

The first two lines were a hook for rhyme-loving girls like self. What are golden heels about? I do like it, even the gentle shortening of the line lengths is very effective but I can't help thinking if you played around with it more, it might flow - moments like reflection/perception don't seem to be exceptions but more highlights. What do you think; do you want it to rhyme? No vote yet because I don't believe it's finished.

I guess you're learning that the people here don't like this kind of stuff. Hoping the title will shield you?

Enjoyable reading

I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.