Why isn't different an adverb?

I really enjoyed this poem!!

Agreed!

their should be spelled "there", just to let you know. Also, "loose" should be "lose"

its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem -emyln

I found it funny, am I wrong?

i absolutely love this! i honestly have no idea why but i sense a brilliance in it! - 10 -

i love this it doesnt make much sense to me but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway - 10 -

i like this - 8 -

um why dont you write a story not a poem, because this comes across as very unskilled and choppy but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story

i like this alot -9- your word choice was very nice

Good

Dialogue between a broken record player and a child perhaps. -you are not a genius- I know you are but what am I? Doesn't do it for me. Who knows, maybe I'm missing the point completely. I hope I am.

i really like this

i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is - 5 -

i like it - 8 -

i love it - 10 - !

Must U rite such gay poems allathe time? Do you know that they make lipstick out of suet? "suety gang..."

If you could haiku it, 10. As is, 9. I re-read 4 times.

spelling problems: priveleged luxury coerced 7.9 regardless