Poemranker [most recent comments (13581-13600)]

whispern_smoke_wisp on What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 9:48 AM

i agree with i_am_the_popsicle

whispern_smoke_wisp on Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 9:49 AM

i agree with crooked_smile

that_funny_girl on Fastso by Dovina 5 Mar 2005, 9:32 AM

i like this - makes you think - 9

that_funny_girl on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 5 Mar 2005, 9:33 AM

i agree with crooked_smile - 10 -

that_funny_girl on Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 9:43 AM

i agree with i_am_the_popsicle - 6 -

whispern_smoke_wisp on some deleted poem 5 Mar 2005, 9:54 AM

i agree with i_am_the_popsicle

that_funny_girl on His Light by DevilBuni 5 Mar 2005, 9:35 AM

i agree basically with crooked_smile - but like it a little bit less - 4 -

crooked_smile on Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 8:36 AM

im not a very big fan of rhyming, and this does sound rather forced to me - 5-

edpeterson on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle 5 Mar 2005, 8:36 AM

Well, if nothing else, at least this puddle of poorly executed drivel has sparked another masterpiece from -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.

edpeterson on Fastso by Dovina 5 Mar 2005, 8:42 AM

Well, it may have gone on a bit, but the first stanza made me guffaw with a recklessness I had not known since middle school. I think I will give you a real vote on this one, as it is a nice change-up from that programming hunger bullshit. You have earned it with what I percieve to be genuine repentance. Forgiveness is yours my child.

crooked_smile on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 5 Mar 2005, 8:47 AM

ooh i love this im not sure if you were trying to convey an "inner" meaning, or if you were just giving an illustrative piece but either way i think its excellent - 10 -

crooked_smile on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry 5 Mar 2005, 8:32 AM

very interesting, i like the images and the melody of it, but im not quite sure im understanding the full meaning

RION12 on Simple by wilco 5 Mar 2005, 10:09 AM

Cool poem.

edpeterson on Fastso by Dovina 5 Mar 2005, 8:44 AM

ahhh.. those were the good old days when I could lie back on the sofa of an afternoon and slag away, unimpeded by the demanding task of critiquing poemes.

crooked_smile on His Light by DevilBuni 5 Mar 2005, 8:49 AM

ah, id say this is just a tab bit cliched, and the rhyming is stale and seems forced, you also spelled souless wrong i believe...the idea you are trying to convey are nice but I think you need to liven it up a bit......- 5 -

i_am_the_popsicle on Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 9:08 AM

interesting and i like some of the word choice especially at the end, however it often at times seems just a bit forced and im not quite sure i get the purpose of this poem - 6 -

i_am_the_popsicle on What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5 Mar 2005, 9:10 AM

uch, no offence but this is terribly terribly cliched, and i dont feel it is all that well written - 4 -

i_am_the_popsicle on some deleted poem 5 Mar 2005, 9:15 AM

- i am not a very big fan - reminds the rhyming seems quite forced and this reminds me of something a 12 year old might write - 5 -

i_am_the_popsicle on some deleted poem 5 Mar 2005, 9:21 AM

its okay - i like the theme and some of the lines in the beginning are nice - but some are also akward - 7 -

dancin_n_da_moonlite on The drug prayer by Nitroxide 5 Mar 2005, 11:25 AM

i like it but it is just a bit long