Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	Ranger 81.158.152.41	21-Jul-08/3:27 AM
lol
Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	Kamikaze 75.7.228.195	21-Jul-08/9:19 AM
mmmmm...Zombies! This sounds like me before coffee.
Re: Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	Dental Panic 87.209.75.3	22-Jul-08/1:18 PM
Pretty good flow but ending too soon.
Re: Almost Alone by sliver	Dovina 68.183.245.143	23-Jul-08/4:21 PM
Becoming more like willow than oak is very Dao and very cool. Verse 2 displays drunkenness; please proofread. Verse 5 is a thing I learned 20 years ago. But Verse 6 blows it. The final verse is a disappointment to a good poem. Goals should always be subject to change.
Re: Magazine Promotion by nentwined	Dovina 68.183.245.143	23-Jul-08/4:27 PM
Where the heck is GUD anyway? I liked 20% of it and that's a lot. Be like Homer, I say, write for absolutely no reason at all and try to sell nothing.
Re: Ashes Of Me by Tyler J. Mancini	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:11 AM
GOD YOU SUCK WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE I LIKED IT A LOT
Re: What you wana hang out later? by T. Jonathron Remp	Tyler J. Mancini 71.85.145.48	25-Jul-08/12:20 AM
What you need to figure out the correct form of a sestina. fail.
Re: Rancor by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:19 AM
Hi D. i remember cheering for you on your 200th poem, and here I see you've done another 100. Way to go girl. But what is this I read 'Amanda Dcosta has gone to heaven'? LOL. I was highly amused with that statement. Ok... guess its time for Amanda Dcosta to step down from heaven and return to our PR World. You guys have been missing me for long..... Hello everyone... good to see you all. Cheers to PR. I'm back !!!
Re: What you wana hang out later? by T. Jonathron Remp	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:24 AM
Am left wondering what this 'what you' is about ...
Re: Question by half.italian	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:25 AM
Interesting.
Re: The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.146	25-Jul-08/4:30 AM
A lovely read.
Re: Almost Alone by sliver	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:04 PM
I stopped reading halfway through.
Re: Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	T. Jonathron Remp 75.50.57.163	25-Jul-08/12:07 PM
Lose, Lose, Lose, Fail
Re: The sea and sonograph by Caducus	dvincent 71.109.127.126	25-Jul-08/3:09 PM
Caducus, Very nice! Touching but not overly sentimental or "easy". I'm not sure about the various winds, but the imagery is interesting and "comfortable". The progression toward sadness comes through strongly, and so does the loneliness of dealing with Downs Syndrome. It has a clean, natural, "unpoetic" feel, which is a very good thing! Great job.
Re: Cinematic Indulgence by nentwined	half.italian 76.172.228.248	25-Jul-08/8:00 PM
I like everything except from "plot" to "fans". It has a great beat.
Re: Someone took... by Tyler J. Mancini	T. Jonathron Remp 74.192.174.220	28-Jul-08/7:52 PM
I would probably go ahead and recommend not writing poetry ever
Re: Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	T. Jonathron Remp 74.192.174.220	28-Jul-08/7:54 PM
This is not a haiku, this is something my neighbor's elderly aunt vomited up after eating spoiled green tomatoes
Re: Childhood Memories by Jessina	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:06 AM
i like the concrete jungle's tie-in with life's musical jingle, either way you're caught
Re: Timber! by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:08 AM
must of been a hefty poo, seeing as how it generated a twin. so i have to double my score? not really, hahaha.
Re: Before The Sun by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:09 AM
If you're too drunk to play guitar, it's okay to play the catatonic scale... downward strum and a blank face