But you are worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun. Look at you can a Wiccan sing? With out her cat and broom Keep on screaming like a tempest Cuz that's all you'll ever do? While I choose to be Bachus And play my cracked sitar You could say, "We're way too spiritual, and tango hipped by far." <Cho^rus}> X2 But you were worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun." /> But you are worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun. Look at you can a Wiccan sing? With out her cat and broom Keep on screaming like a tempest Cuz that's all you'll ever do? While I choose to be Bachus And play my cracked sitar You could say, "We're way too spiritual, and tango hipped by far." <Cho^rus}> X2 But you were worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun." />
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Before The Sun (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Look at you such a pretty thing Wearing one Gucci shoe Standing naked in a dazzling storm Singing, "Oh, what shall I do?" While I laugh and drink my Merlot Too drunk to strum guitar You could say, "Well it's a miracle" That we have made it quite this far <{Cho^rus}> But you are worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun. Look at you can a Wiccan sing? With out her cat and broom Keep on screaming like a tempest Cuz that's all you'll ever do? While I choose to be Bachus And play my cracked sitar You could say, "We're way too spiritual, and tango hipped by far." <Cho^rus}> X2 But you were worth your weight in gold. I prayed for clay that I could mold. Love is safer I was told. Safe before the sun.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.85
Weighted score: 5.809688
Overall Rank: 1653
Posted: December 6, 2002 2:12 PM PST; Last modified: September 18, 2003 2:14 PM PDT
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[8] brazen @ 65.237.114.141 | 22-Dec-02/11:47 PM | Reply
putting the words love and safe together in the same sentence can have deadly consequences. but still, i must admit to this once again striking a chord in my brain. i shall now depart, leaving this place after repaying your kind words for me by leaving my fucking five votes.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > brazen | 23-Dec-02/12:51 PM | Reply
friction in the earth creates mountains where wonderful things live and grow. you'll be a mountain yet.
[9] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 19-Jan-03/10:44 PM | Reply
Every time, I read it I think it's about me....and I guess that's what poetry is about....but since you claim it is not...instead of a 10...here's a 9.
[8] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.70 | 18-Sep-03/5:42 PM | Reply
Perpendicular without being farcical. A beautiful compromise. -8-
[10] deleted user @ 64.63.204.8 | 18-Sep-03/7:31 PM | Reply
leaves me wondering what changes you made...but that's not important.

"I prayed for clay that I could mold."

you can mould me.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > deleted user | 18-Sep-03/8:40 PM | Reply
Well for one thing.. you are smart enough to make that connection (moulde, mould, mold), and I rather enjoy your work. I think you to be quite brilliant and daringly dasterdly dynamic.
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 19-Sep-03/11:50 AM | Reply
Wonderful, and that's not just because I'm wonderful. 8.542.
[n/a] FreeFormFixation @ 98.212.148.58 | 29-Jul-08/2:09 AM | Reply
If you're too drunk to play guitar, it's okay to play the catatonic scale...
downward strum and a blank face
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