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sex (Haiku) by Limness young man, you and I
tug and coil without music
or wisdom
or hope
Up the ladder:
more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus}
Down the ladder:
Before The Sun
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Posted: October 18, 2002 12:09 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2002 12:31 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.809688 Overall Rank: 1652 Comments:
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knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89
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18-Oct-02/12:12 PM
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Safe sex?
he was that bad?
Did you just change the title?C
yes. i took my cue from you.
How about bootie call?
Ain't it the truth. Young and dumb.
tug just ruins this. and you are easy!?
i used 'tug and coil' because he quoted it to me, from 'quickie'.
and as for being easy, hypothetically, yes, i am as easy as i want to be. practically, no. i call the shots, and this did not happen. nor will it, because there is no music in him, and a great urge to tug. so, no hope.
yes, we do.
this brings me down. depressing and wonderful, like the end of something. 9 swastikas!
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