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Sestina № 155686

What you wana hang out later?

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Jul 2008 · 8 comments

What you got a reason to tie me in a knot? What you got five reasons to tell me I'm not The one What you go and have fun with your friends without me? What you had a raised pool party and didn't invite me? What you got a new job and didn't tell me the most direct route from where I'm stayin with my uncle What you got a new boyfriend and think you all that What you leave me like a flat on the highway What you need is a smack on the eyeball Hit me up later or i'll call

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8 comments

[n/a] Tyler J. Mancini 25-Jul-08/12:20 AM Reply
What you need to figure out the correct form of a sestina. fail.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › Tyler J. Mancini 12-Dec-16/12:20 PM Reply
Have you never heard of an ITALIAN Sestina? Total idiot
[4] amanda_dcosta 25-Jul-08/4:24 AM Reply
Am left wondering what this 'what you' is about ...
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › amanda_dcosta 12-Dec-16/12:19 PM Reply
Why? Are you intellectually diminished?
[0] Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:33 PM Reply
Um. Why did you think I wanted to read about your silly failed attempt at loving? You know why she left? It wasn't your loving-- It was your obsessin.

Zero.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › Don-Quixote 12-Dec-16/12:19 PM Reply
No, it was my loving. You're not very smart
[0] Edna Sweetlove 5-Aug-08/8:29 AM Reply
Illiterate tripe.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › Edna Sweetlove 12-Dec-16/12:20 PM Reply
I don't want to hear about your lunch