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What you wana hang out later? (Sestina) by T. Jonathron Remp

What you got a reason to tie me in a knot? What you got five reasons to tell me I'm not The one What you go and have fun with your friends without me? What you had a raised pool party and didn't invite me? What you got a new job and didn't tell me the most direct route from where I'm stayin with my uncle What you got a new boyfriend and think you all that What you leave me like a flat on the highway What you need is a smack on the eyeball Hit me up later or i'll call

Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:33 PM
Um. Why did you think I wanted to read about your silly failed attempt at loving? You know why she left? It wasn't your loving-- It was your obsessin.

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