poemranker ::Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini

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Haiku № 155706

Soulless Circle

by Tyler J. Mancini

Member since 2008 · Posted 28 Jul 2008 · 8 comments

The race is over. Why did we even bother? I want some pizza.

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4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

8 comments

[0] T. Jonathron Remp 28-Jul-08/7:54 PM Reply
This is not a haiku, this is something my neighbor's elderly aunt vomited up after eating spoiled green tomatoes
[8] dvincent › T. Jonathron Remp 28-Jul-08/8:15 PM Reply
Actually this is a Haiku, and not a bad one at that. It captures a single moment/sentiment nicely. Good job Tyler.
[7] Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:18 PM Reply
Actually, no. It's not quite a haiku YET...
575.

What we have here is 565. Add another syllable to the middle of this, and my six would become a seven.
[8] dvincent › Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/8:56 PM Reply
It does have 7 syllables in the middle line.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › dvincent 30-Jul-08/6:52 AM Reply
-squints again- Ah fuck. I hate these moments... Oh well, atleast we know the drugs are good and they are definetly working.
[7] Don-Quixote 30-Jul-08/7:03 AM Reply
So anyway TJTwin, heres your seven. Oh, and your shutup list had the opposite effect... and it wasn't even funny.
[n/a] Tyler J. Mancini › Don-Quixote 30-Jul-08/7:54 AM Reply
Your counting skills are akin to that of a brain dead 4th grader... Nice job!
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet › Tyler J. Mancini 30-Jul-08/8:08 AM Reply
Wow, your skill at being opportunistic only reinforces the fact that you're horridly unoriginal and possess the character qualities of a tantalized vulture. But, on the brighter side, you got a minor vote score adjustment that says you barely made par. Toodles dipshit!