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Soulless Circle (Haiku) by Tyler J. Mancini

The race is over. Why did we even bother? I want some pizza.

Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:18 PM
Actually, no. It's not quite a haiku YET...
575.

What we have here is 565. Add another syllable to the middle of this, and my six would become a seven.




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