Re: Blood Plush by Kamikaze	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:14 AM
oh, god... this reminds me of when my dad used to buy and sell those things... i must have eaten 100 microwaved happy meals...
Re: a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:16 AM
too much... too little attention span... but props on the good intro
regarding some deleted poem...	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:17 AM
he wrote it already. no sequel necessary.
Re: I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:19 AM
i never got a flower for my b-day, and somehow, my dad was never offended...
Re: Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:20 AM
lame (no pun intended)
Re: Today is another day by Prince of Void	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:55 AM
if you're happy from point a to b, as you've defined here, then you're good to go my friend
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:56 AM
lobotamy?
regarding some deleted poem...	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:00 AM
i like wires and grass tied together. Very concrete. i think your last two lines were unecessary
Re: Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:02 AM
i dont know if i want to be taken there.
Re: Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:03 AM
eh
Re: If I can't swim there I'll float by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:04 AM
eh
Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:06 AM
suspension of disbelief cancelled... in a bad way.
Re: The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:10 AM
you make me reflect and regret upon all the long stuff i've ever written
Re: ayow by skaskowski	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:07 PM
Shootin craps? Gambling addiction? Hmmm.
Re: If you want? by FreeFormFixation	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:10 PM
Ok, well my only real issue is that... this isn't a lyric. I've heard nor seen a thirty second song. Seven.
Re: too much too soon by JMakStak	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:11 PM
Tell me about it.
Re: Someone took... by Tyler J. Mancini	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:13 PM
Um... the ending is the only thing I liked. It was a good ending, the last three stanzas... if you could call those stanzas. Four.
Re: Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:18 PM
Actually, no. It's not quite a haiku YET... 575. What we have here is 565. Add another syllable to the middle of this, and my six would become a seven.
regarding some deleted poem...	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:19 PM
Not bad, not bad at all. Eight.
Re: Today is another day by Prince of Void	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:26 PM
thorough the reflection of toilet mirror-- ....? through? hmmm? You know, if your going to be depressive and write a poem about it for worthless bastards like me to read, could you do me a favor? Could you atleast make it interesting? Please? And original? Without the befuddled flow and the gutted speech? Or the cliches like "I used to think the world was too (so) big? I have these thoughts too. But, see, I've learned that such thoughts written and shared doesn't amount to poetry-- it only gives proof to everyone that you didn't have something worth writing about. Five.