Re: EVADING THE FLESH by daggatolar	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:11 AM
you forgot about sporks... gouging out eyes is way too easy, though, right...?
Re: S.O.S. by amanda_dcosta	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:12 AM
is me actually commenting on this your first radio signal? sorry...
Re: Blood Plush by Kamikaze	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:14 AM
oh, god... this reminds me of when my dad used to buy and sell those things... i must have eaten 100 microwaved happy meals...
Re: a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:16 AM
too much... too little attention span... but props on the good intro
regarding some deleted poem...	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:17 AM
he wrote it already. no sequel necessary.
Re: I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:19 AM
i never got a flower for my b-day, and somehow, my dad was never offended...
Re: Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:20 AM
lame (no pun intended)
Re: Today is another day by Prince of Void	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:55 AM
if you're happy from point a to b, as you've defined here, then you're good to go my friend
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/2:56 AM
lobotamy?
regarding some deleted poem...	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:00 AM
i like wires and grass tied together. Very concrete. i think your last two lines were unecessary
Re: Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:02 AM
i dont know if i want to be taken there.
Re: Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:03 AM
eh
Re: If I can't swim there I'll float by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:04 AM
eh
Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:06 AM
suspension of disbelief cancelled... in a bad way.
Re: The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58	29-Jul-08/3:10 AM
you make me reflect and regret upon all the long stuff i've ever written
Re: ayow by skaskowski	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:07 PM
Shootin craps? Gambling addiction? Hmmm.
Re: If you want? by FreeFormFixation	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:10 PM
Ok, well my only real issue is that... this isn't a lyric. I've heard nor seen a thirty second song. Seven.
Re: too much too soon by JMakStak	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:11 PM
Tell me about it.
Re: Someone took... by Tyler J. Mancini	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:13 PM
Um... the ending is the only thing I liked. It was a good ending, the last three stanzas... if you could call those stanzas. Four.
Re: Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	29-Jul-08/5:18 PM
Actually, no. It's not quite a haiku YET... 575. What we have here is 565. Add another syllable to the middle of this, and my six would become a seven.