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Someone took... (Free verse) by Tyler J. Mancini Someone took my pen.
Now I can't write Jen.
Someone took my meal.
Now I can't eat last night's veal.
Someone took my chair.
Now I can't sit there.
Someone took my wallet.
Now I can't buy a mallet.
Someone took my car.
Now I can't go to the bar.
Someone took my spouse.
Now I can't get in my house.
Someone broke my life.
Time to take something back.
Up the ladder:
SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE
Down the ladder:
missing pieces
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Posted: July 28, 2008 3:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2008 3:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12367 Comments:
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T. Jonathron Remp @ 74.192.174.220
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28-Jul-08/7:52 PM
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I would probably go ahead and recommend not writing poetry ever
Um... the ending is the only thing I liked. It was a good ending, the last three stanzas... if you could call those stanzas.
Four.
Someone took your brain
And what you write is a pain. 135 view(s)
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