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Someone took... (Free verse) by Tyler J. Mancini

Someone took my pen. Now I can't write Jen. Someone took my meal. Now I can't eat last night's veal. Someone took my chair. Now I can't sit there. Someone took my wallet. Now I can't buy a mallet. Someone took my car. Now I can't go to the bar. Someone took my spouse. Now I can't get in my house. Someone broke my life. Time to take something back.

Don-Quixote 29-Jul-08/5:13 PM
Um... the ending is the only thing I liked. It was a good ending, the last three stanzas... if you could call those stanzas.

Four.




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