Edna Sweetlove
on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT
15 May 2006, 5:07 PM
painfully bad.
No thank you.
You don't know what a limerick is.
Good. Original rhyming asnd scansion. talented.
What the fuck is a spack?
Rhyming bad. humour zero.
last line: contortions.
What is the joke, dear?
OK I suppose. Not exactly rib-tickling.
Vulgar without humour to complement it.
I give up.this is rubbish.
Dave says this stinks.
The rhyming is simply hopeless. Unbelievable.
The first one is good: 8/10; the others less so (3-4/10). Average = 5/10
Better than most of the garbage listed under limericks here so 5/10
Not good. Where were you when the humour tablets were handed out?
illiterate - ungrammatical - unamusing - not a limerick - well done - not .
At least I can't understand it which is better than most of the crap i just read.
The last line seems to say the same thing twice, which, in a haiku, is far too many.
Having just borne witness to your incredible roundup of the limericks on here, the least I can do is leave a comment on one of your poems. And here it is:
This poem is a golden opportunity to rhyme 'Samson' with 'ram some'. I'll leave you to decide what was rammed, and where.