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Creation of all Things (Limerick) by KnightofMidkemia There was once a great Big Bang.
From which the entire universe sprang
Into galaxies, stars
And lands afar.
In the night sky it all does hang.
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Posted: April 10, 2004 1:36 AM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2004 1:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10364 Comments:
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electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.15
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10-Apr-04/3:14 PM
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the big bang theory is a theory, however, i beleive it to be false
Good up to "bruang" which seems there only for the rhyme, a poor reason.
alright well, if you can find something else that rhymes with Bang or sprang that fits the theme then let me know.
Dang, gang, gangbang, harangue, slang, tang, [Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles villain] Krang. www.rhymezone.com
I like its unusual slant (that its not about a person), but time to remake the last line.
OK I suppose. Not exactly rib-tickling.
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