Edna Sweetlove
on some deleted poem
15 May 2006, 4:57 PM
Puerile.
Say what?
Not a limerick.
Not very funny.
Silly rubbish.
inconsequentially boring.
You didn't use "anus".
How is this a limerick? Are you potty?
I lost interest after "panned cakes".
At least it rhymes. And i like the word CUNT.
Pathetically bad.
dreadfully unamusing. puerile. sad. not even sick.
Unintelligible.
The only funny limerick I have read in the past 20. I love spunk.
Brilliant rhyming. 1/10
Edna Sweetlove
on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 May 2006, 5:00 PM
Illiterate. Not limericks. Pathetic.
He deserved it. So do you for not knowing the past tense of "to spit".
Painfully unamusing and amateurish. Soup does not rhyme with troops. Bad metre.
You need some capital letters here. I'd have marked higher with them.
Studded with illiteracy; overlong; but at least a teeeeeeeeny bit amusing. Splling dreadful.