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Harry & the Little Bird (Limerick) by Goad There once was a fellow from Schnectady
Who was arrested and hung for his perfidy:
He said "I'll be gentle",
Was instead detrimental --
though that's not hard when you're fucking a chickadee.
Up the ladder:
a fat man on the dock
Down the ladder:
My reflection
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Posted: February 2, 2005 2:42 PM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2005 2:42 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7561 Comments:
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Beyond_Dreams @ 67.51.232.76
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2-Feb-05/3:04 PM
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I went to college in Schnectady.
Perfidy, great word. I'm not really liking this too much but I'm going to give you an 8 just for that.
I've an eight for my perfidy, how grand
Though the rest of the poetry's judged bland perhaps it'd less bore you the Schnectadian to explore you -- can you more than the chickadee withstand?
What a poet will do to stick to a form!
What a poet will do to stick to a form!
With words play what tricks to the mold to conform! But it jusn't isn't fair - no! To harm a poor little helpless baby sparrow, One man's tale as a pome to perform.
Brilliant rhyming. 1/10
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