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Covering the white house (Limerick) by INTRANSIT
I wanted to be deep inside her. " Safely!" I said I'd abide her. The installed diaphragm burst when 'twas slammed, I'd bought a defective jet-fighter.

Up the ladder: USS Pride
Down the ladder: forest morning

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10136
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2005 5:14 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 11-May-05/6:09 PM | Reply
There's definitely a Fabulous Furried Freak Brothers charm here.
[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 12-May-05/11:45 AM | Reply
Somehow the title and the last line are alien to to the rest. Otherwise funny.
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.117.218 | 15-May-06/5:06 PM | Reply
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