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Covering the white house (Limerick) by INTRANSIT I wanted to be deep inside her.
" Safely!" I said I'd abide her.
The installed diaphragm
burst when 'twas slammed,
I'd bought a defective jet-fighter.
Up the ladder:
Ghostly Rememberance
Down the ladder:
Snowboarding, Sierra Nevada, 12/31/03
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2005 5:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10151 Comments:
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11-May-05/6:09 PM
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There's definitely a Fabulous Furried Freak Brothers charm here.
Somehow the title and the last line are alien to to the rest. Otherwise funny.
Say what?
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