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Pain (Limerick) by camperdfl
The Lies My Cries The Screams My Dreams My Rage In A Cage The Pain Can I Maintain.

Up the ladder: Welcome to my life
Down the ladder: Freedom

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9847
Posted: March 17, 2005 9:26 AM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2005 9:26 AM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 12.72.11.42 | 17-Mar-05/1:10 PM | Reply
Not a limerick. Would be stronger without the first word in each line, Lies/Cries/Screams . . .
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.117.218 | 15-May-06/5:02 PM | Reply
How is this a limerick? Are you potty?
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