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Pain (Limerick) by camperdfl The Lies
My Cries
The Screams
My Dreams
My Rage
In A Cage
The Pain
Can I Maintain.
Up the ladder:
Broken Bird
Down the ladder:
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Posted: March 17, 2005 9:26 AM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2005 9:26 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9854 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.11.42
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17-Mar-05/1:10 PM
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Not a limerick. Would be stronger without the first word in each line, Lies/Cries/Screams . . .
How is this a limerick? Are you potty?
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