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Pain

Member since 2004 · Posted 17 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

The Lies My Cries The Screams My Dreams My Rage In A Cage The Pain Can I Maintain.

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[6] Dovina 17-Mar-05/1:10 PM Reply
Not a limerick. Would be stronger without the first word in each line, Lies/Cries/Screams . . .
[0] Edna Sweetlove 15-May-06/5:02 PM Reply
How is this a limerick? Are you potty?