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Pain (Limerick) by camperdfl

The Lies My Cries The Screams My Dreams My Rage In A Cage The Pain Can I Maintain.

Dovina 17-Mar-05/1:10 PM
Not a limerick. Would be stronger without the first word in each line, Lies/Cries/Screams . . .




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