Bachus
on Kenny G by Everyone
12 Jan 2004, 10:15 AM
Too many curls, yack!
whoa...
I guess he must be English.
I lost it in a few places but you are talking about living in a foreign land so I guess that expected
This looks a bit rough to me, like a diamond still partly encased in the rock that was its womb, it needs a little work. But the light is there.
forest's wet or forest-wet. I didn't uderstand the ending at all so I will withold my vote.
Yeah, I'm Audrey's very besttest friend,Kristy, might I say, one of your best,Anthony!
'Hang like blues' doesn't make any sense.
And I know there are those that have to cause fear, that would have us believe there were criminals on every corner. Nevertheless how did these criminals manage to sneek into your poem.
His hands kissed you? must be to do with strumming but..
You should trip the black ones?
LMAO.
Indeed. Blessed with ten.
That was a mouthful of warm ice-cream.
Amen.
Nice hunting traps. 8.
Finally got around to giving this ole piece the face lift it desperately needed.
Canonic... sweit.
You shut up about Kilroy.
There once was a twisted poof wizard
that had the poetical skills of a lizard
that had died on the road
humping a horny toad
With a leaky chode set to explode.
A bit long.. alot of editing could be done (mostly minor tweaks allover) that could really improve this poem.
Blessed with eight.
I ask myself those questions all the time...
Blessed with nine.