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Up. (Free verse) by fevriere
Up.
Out.
Safe.
A haven is heaven, just for the outbreath. The emptihead.
The emptihead that allows the sky in.
Listening. Forgession.
Breathing, my respite, the feeling of green transpiration,
sweat the colour of green make-up
sweet & secret & terribly beautiful.
Tears are coming, and going, and sea and breath
And see here on the breach of things,
in the centre of my eye, if you dare to look:
Listening. The possible concept of a darling Love. Forgession.
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Posted: January 12, 2004 3:29 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2004 3:29 AM PST
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