| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
Not for Me (Free verse) by TLRufener Alone and cold
Your warmth
So far away
Eyes that never see
Ears that never hear
A heart the never beats
Not for me
My words fall deaf
Even when I speak
They mean nothing
To anyone but me
Up the ladder:
Who's on First?
Down the ladder:
Transient
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: December 27, 2005 8:09 AM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2005 8:09 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9503 Comments:
you've described perfectly an "unhearing" person I knew...he never did "hear" me. enjoyed
153 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Interesting image, words falling deaf. When most people would say words fell mute, or words fell on deaf ears. Seriously, why don't you try saying what YOU, DancingShamrock, mean, instead of saying what a million people before you meant? I think you would do better that way, is all.