middenHeap
on The Sun and the Moon by Princess_Snowflake
11 Jan 2004, 4:23 PM
snowflake -- what the hell are you talking about?
I like the style a lot, and wish I had found it carved into a desk.
you'd asked what had been spawned... the answer to that, is everything
It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.
This is very strong poetry which not many people are capable of
fucked up, like poems should be, this is a little too off for me
it's awsome writing, but a little long-winded
Get the hell outta here Zodiac! No. Nevermind. I'll show myself the door. Thank you.
to INTRANSIT: No offense intended?
whatever floats your goat dude
"Tho"? What are you stupid? The word is 'thou' you fucking ass. You should paint ball the inside of your mouth you fucking daft tit.
lol, you've been reading Mr. B.
Little_Big_Nose & The Argument From Evil
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There once was a little big nose
Who ever the question did pose
If there's a god,
Why'd he give me a rod
That's only as big as my toes?
There's a goth that forgets all his u's
When he rants at the folk in their pews
But if you can't spell
Than even in hell
You'll get nothing from us but abuse.
There once was a black-clothed paintballer
Who at christians would constantly holler
He'd be far less wroth,
(& maybe more preppy than goth)
If only his dick would stand taller
It's quite simple, like a song, which makes it effective but telling instead of showing, which bores me a bit.
Powerful words, excellent meter and rhythm.
This truly ranks among the world's best disability haiku.
fevriere
on The most trite garbage ever(in other words my love life) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
12 Jan 2004, 6:07 AM
No, no, please save it for yourself. Give us something entertaining, something I want to hear. And don't speak of daggers. Everyone knows there's no such thing.