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A dream of a fruit-gun (Other) by zodiac
You had a fruit gun
I saw, and thought you'd got it the usual way:
From night-classes, or the NRA â
There's licensure for these things. And try
As I might, you'd sight somewhere among the passers-by
â I could not stop you â and shoot one,
A boy, a man in a suit, one
Tired housewife with her box of lye:
It didn't matter
To you in your school bell-tower, Ambusher of naiveté â
Oh, you were a cute one,
Laughing over its clatter-clatter
With your laugh that seemed like a cry,
Not shooting banana or even papay-
A, though that might have at least made sense:
We could all use more potassium, zinc, iron.
But you'd found a Forbidden Fruit-gun,
And at your feet, as on display,
The dark, pulp-rotting fruit, dense
And sweet, purple-grey
Where long-ago bites had taken a piece away â
Shoot one, and watch them scatter.
From their sin â you, mad as a hatter
And none of your headlong victims were as tense,
None thought you more a brute â none
Wished more for the screaming peace of a siren
Than I. But what could I say?
Come off it, sad tyrant?
Lay your black vengeance aside â let it be you and I,
And if we should die
Alone in this, let it be nothing of consequence â
You, with your Whitman, your Bible, your Byron
At your poor defense.
You, clutching your fruit-gun,
Know that we have no more certainty than they
And are as much a product our environs.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.3
Weighted score: 6.65
Overall Rank: 558
Posted: January 11, 2004 2:17 PM PST; Last modified: January 11, 2004 2:17 PM PST
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