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deleted scenes (Pimple) by Bill Z Bub Remember
when I didn't punch
that potato-faced bully
in the gut
or the time I refused
to stand
at the front of the class
and read my report
aloud?
And when we had
an extended edition
the look on your face
I think
there was a smile
when we touched jeans.
But even that was nothing
to you
apparently.
Up the ladder:
papercut suicide
Down the ladder:
When We Parted
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Posted: April 8, 2003 9:00 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 7:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9551764 Overall Rank: 8714 Comments:
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Ranger @ 213.120.56.37
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9-Apr-03/11:26 AM
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You are the man, Bill.
You know BZB, you and I have a lot in common. You're a terrible draughtsman, I'm a terrible draughtsman. You like limeade, I like limeade. You like writing shit poetry, I like writing shit poetry. You like Linkin' Park...well I can't say I like Linkin' Park. We're not as different as you think! PS Your impostor is horus8, I think. Frankly I have no idea but the smart money's on horus8. Oh and 9 for the poem!! Eggselent work my man!!
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I hate Linkin Park. But I do love limeade. How did you know?
I know your imposter is not horus8. That said.
great poem. GQTip awarde.
Please post more drawings in the vein of http://geocities.com/rugosecone/birdcage
I would, if I had access to a phuqkin scanner. Gaaaaaaaah!
is the last scene deleted, bill? because it feels really, really real.
you are very perceptive. And may I say, you have a beautiful ~.
Dude, we need to get you a scanner.
Peekaboo
I seeeeeeee you!
wistful, quite sparse in its language but throws up a few nice phrases 'potato faced bully' is nice
How bad do you want a ten?
Just tell me what I gotta do, my friend.
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.
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