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deleted scenes (Pimple) by Bill Z Bub
Remember when I didn't punch that potato-faced bully in the gut or the time I refused to stand at the front of the class and read my report aloud? And when we had an extended edition the look on your face I think there was a smile when we touched jeans. But even that was nothing to you apparently.

Up the ladder: papercut suicide
Down the ladder: When We Parted

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8674
Posted: April 8, 2003 9:00 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 7:18 PM PDT
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[9] Ranger @ 213.120.56.37 | 9-Apr-03/11:26 AM | Reply
You are the man, Bill.
[9] dmzoacan @ 68.14.26.239 | 27-Apr-03/5:53 PM | Reply
You know BZB, you and I have a lot in common. You're a terrible draughtsman, I'm a terrible draughtsman. You like limeade, I like limeade. You like writing shit poetry, I like writing shit poetry. You like Linkin' Park...well I can't say I like Linkin' Park. We're not as different as you think! PS Your impostor is horus8, I think. Frankly I have no idea but the smart money's on horus8. Oh and 9 for the poem!! Eggselent work my man!!
[9] dmzoacan @ 68.14.26.239 > dmzoacan | 27-Apr-03/5:55 PM | Reply
DMZOACAN=SETTLE..RGALLET...TANHAND...SLAPMEONTHEPATIO...LORD GANUS...TMARAZ112...POETECH...MINUTESWITHU...ORANGEPRAWNE...ETC.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > dmzoacan | 27-Apr-03/6:20 PM | Reply
I hate Linkin Park. But I do love limeade. How did you know?
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Apr-03/8:39 PM | Reply
I know your imposter is not horus8. That said.

great poem. GQTip awarde.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 21-May-03/5:38 AM | Reply
Please post more drawings in the vein of http://geocities.com/rugosecone/birdcage.html
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 21-May-03/10:09 AM | Reply
I would, if I had access to a phuqkin scanner. Gaaaaaaaah!
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 18-Aug-03/12:01 PM | Reply
is the last scene deleted, bill? because it feels really, really real.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 > <~> | 18-Aug-03/4:31 PM | Reply
you are very perceptive. And may I say, you have a beautiful ~.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > Bill Z Bub | 21-Aug-03/12:19 AM | Reply
Dude, we need to get you a scanner.
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-03/7:21 PM | Reply
Peekaboo
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 > Bachus | 20-Aug-03/9:20 AM | Reply
I seeeeeeee you!
[8] richa @ 81.86.251.209 | 19-Aug-03/7:49 AM | Reply
wistful, quite sparse in its language but throws up a few nice phrases 'potato faced bully' is nice
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Aug-03/12:18 AM | Reply
How bad do you want a ten?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 23-Aug-03/5:48 PM | Reply
Just tell me what I gotta do, my friend.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 | 23-Aug-03/6:03 PM | Reply
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
[8] fevriere @ 213.232.79.194 | 12-Jan-04/6:09 AM | Reply
It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.
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