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deleted scenes

by Bill Z Bub

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Apr 2003 · Edited 20 Aug 2003 · 17 comments

Remember when I didn't punch that potato-faced bully in the gut or the time I refused to stand at the front of the class and read my report aloud? And when we had an extended edition the look on your face I think there was a smile when we touched jeans. But even that was nothing to you apparently.

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17 comments

[9] Ranger 9-Apr-03/11:26 AM Reply
You are the man, Bill.
[9] dmzoacan 27-Apr-03/5:53 PM Reply
You know BZB, you and I have a lot in common. You're a terrible draughtsman, I'm a terrible draughtsman. You like limeade, I like limeade. You like writing shit poetry, I like writing shit poetry. You like Linkin' Park...well I can't say I like Linkin' Park. We're not as different as you think! PS Your impostor is horus8, I think. Frankly I have no idea but the smart money's on horus8. Oh and 9 for the poem!! Eggselent work my man!!
[9] dmzoacan › dmzoacan 27-Apr-03/5:55 PM Reply
DMZOACAN=SETTLE..RGALLET...TANHAND...SLAPMEONTHEPATIO...LORD GANUS...TMARAZ112...POETECH...MINUTESWITHU...ORANGEPRAWNE...ETC.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › dmzoacan 27-Apr-03/6:20 PM Reply
I hate Linkin Park. But I do love limeade. How did you know?
[10] horus8 27-Apr-03/8:39 PM Reply
I know your imposter is not horus8. That said.

great poem. GQTip awarde.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-May-03/5:38 AM Reply
Please post more drawings in the vein of http://geocities.com/rugosecone/birdcage.html
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-May-03/10:09 AM Reply
I would, if I had access to a phuqkin scanner. Gaaaaaaaah!
[8] <~> 18-Aug-03/12:01 PM Reply
is the last scene deleted, bill? because it feels really, really real.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › <~> 18-Aug-03/4:31 PM Reply
you are very perceptive. And may I say, you have a beautiful ~.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Bill Z Bub 21-Aug-03/12:19 AM Reply
Dude, we need to get you a scanner.
[10] Bachus 18-Aug-03/7:21 PM Reply
Peekaboo
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › Bachus 20-Aug-03/9:20 AM Reply
I seeeeeeee you!
[8] richa 19-Aug-03/7:49 AM Reply
wistful, quite sparse in its language but throws up a few nice phrases 'potato faced bully' is nice
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 21-Aug-03/12:18 AM Reply
How bad do you want a ten?
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › <{Baba^Yaga}> 23-Aug-03/5:48 PM Reply
Just tell me what I gotta do, my friend.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub 23-Aug-03/6:03 PM Reply
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
[8] fevriere 12-Jan-04/6:09 AM Reply
It totally hits. I don't know what I like about it but I still like it.