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Free verse № 48418

When We Parted

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 May 2003 · 3 comments

Will it take aeons, do you think, to cover The distances in light years that stand between us? We must have walked quite away from each other When we parted Yet, it is said things go round eventually … I hope you did not stop somewhere waiting For me to come up? I'm in front of you, hastening …

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3-May-03/7:29 AM Reply
TORTIONAL OVULE BLANKET
[7] rockinindividual 3-May-03/7:32 AM Reply
thats a really interesting idea. i like it. 7
[7] richa 3-May-03/10:07 AM Reply
Sweet and well put together