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When We Parted (Free verse) by anitawit
Will it take aeons, do you think, to cover The distances in light years that stand between us? We must have walked quite away from each other When we parted Yet, it is said things go round eventually … I hope you did not stop somewhere waiting For me to come up? I'm in front of you, hastening …

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8710
Posted: May 1, 2003 1:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2003 1:13 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96 | 3-May-03/7:29 AM | Reply
TORTIONAL OVULE BLANKET
[7] rockinindividual @ 24.136.137.164 | 3-May-03/7:32 AM | Reply
thats a really interesting idea. i like it. 7
[7] richa @ 195.92.168.172 | 3-May-03/10:07 AM | Reply
Sweet and well put together
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