poemranker ::Shaolin Rain by Topaz Servias

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Shaolin Rain

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 May 2003 · 0 comments

Tra la la la la I gave my heart to you Tra la la la la You threw it at my shoe Hidee doo dee doo It fell to the floor Hidee doo dee doo I can't pee any more Some more words come and go But me oh my they can't seem to flow I push and shove but to no avail They all are stuck within my pail Maybe if I take some prunes I can blow those words like sand dunes Or if they are truly stuck I'll get someone I'd like to F*** That would get my creative juices flowing All that without them even knowing Then maybe I will be free Yes then I will be able to pee

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