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Shaolin Rain (Free verse) by Topaz Servias
Tra la la la la I gave my heart to you Tra la la la la You threw it at my shoe Hidee doo dee doo It fell to the floor Hidee doo dee doo I can't pee any more Some more words come and go But me oh my they can't seem to flow I push and shove but to no avail They all are stuck within my pail Maybe if I take some prunes I can blow those words like sand dunes Or if they are truly stuck I'll get someone I'd like to F*** That would get my creative juices flowing All that without them even knowing Then maybe I will be free Yes then I will be able to pee

Up the ladder: When We Parted
Down the ladder: meaningless

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8697
Posted: May 4, 2003 7:53 PM PDT; Last modified: May 4, 2003 7:53 PM PDT
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