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Shaolin Rain (Free verse) by Topaz Servias
Tra la la la la
I gave my heart to you
Tra la la la la
You threw it at my shoe
Hidee doo dee doo
It fell to the floor
Hidee doo dee doo
I can't pee any more
Some more words come and go
But me oh my they can't seem to flow
I push and shove but to no avail
They all are stuck within my pail
Maybe if I take some prunes
I can blow those words like sand dunes
Or if they are truly stuck
I'll get someone I'd like to F***
That would get my creative juices flowing
All that without them even knowing
Then maybe I will be free
Yes then I will be able to pee
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8716
Posted: May 4, 2003 7:53 PM PDT; Last modified: May 4, 2003 7:53 PM PDT
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