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When We Parted (Free verse) by anitawit

Will it take aeons, do you think, to cover The distances in light years that stand between us? We must have walked quite away from each other When we parted Yet, it is said things go round eventually … I hope you did not stop somewhere waiting For me to come up? I'm in front of you, hastening …

rockinindividual 3-May-03/7:32 AM
thats a really interesting idea. i like it. 7




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