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The Sun and the Moon (Limerick) by Princess_Snowflake
During the day the sun is up in the sky while the moon is somewhere on Earth The sun is still shining when the moon fades during the day and the sun is still up there with the glow of light Then the moon is about to go up and the sun starts to fade while the moon glows in the dark The sun fades with darkness when the moon shows up with light on the night sky with stars The moon stays awake while the sun sleeps with the smile on its face and the moon smiles while it's awake looking over and making the stars sparkle like glitter The sun still sleeps dreaming about the day and the moon floats and enjoys the night with the sky being dark and beautiful.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12309
Posted: January 6, 2004 9:43 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 9:43 PM PST
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[10]... anonymous @ 65.173.32.8 | 6-Jan-04/10:50 PM | Reply
The only problem I have is
The complete lack of astronomical knowledge you have.
We live in the age of the 'spirit' rover now honey.
Screw the moon and the stars.
Write about Uranus and Pluto
and How they interact with my ass
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 > anonymous | 6-Jan-04/10:54 PM | Reply
i wrote the above
[n/a] middenHeap @ 217.226.30.158 | 11-Jan-04/4:23 PM | Reply
snowflake -- what the hell are you talking about?
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