| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
15-Mar-05/7:16 PM |
"Last but not least could we get of this poor womans comment page, I'm sure no one wants to hear what you or myself has to say to eachother. "
Interesting comment to write on "this poor woman's comment page."
I suppose irony is a foreign concept.
then you go on to apologize to those who have had to read all this crap, while posting MORE CRAP.
Beautiful stuff.
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| Re: JJâs Church by Dovina |
15-Mar-05/9:05 AM |
Substitutionary is funny. Dyn-O-MITE!
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| Re: Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart |
15-Mar-05/9:02 AM |
I think this is poetic and potentially potent.
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| Re: Peridot by horus8 |
15-Mar-05/8:55 AM |
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One of my favorites by you. Right up there with Temporal, imho
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
15-Mar-05/8:52 AM |
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PPS I assumed you were young. It may be far worse than I origninally thought.
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
15-Mar-05/8:50 AM |
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P.S. In order to learn how to speak and write a language, one need not attend school.
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
15-Mar-05/8:49 AM |
"Yes my English is by far not up to par, for that i have , and do apologize. My grammer is even worse"
You have just admitted to incompetence as a writer. Can you not see this?
I never asked for your sordid family history. Please keep the details of your life to yourself, until you get to the Jerry Springer stage. Then let them fly like your shoes.
Mr. Hot Shot is out to lunch. Would you like to leave a message?
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| Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
14-Mar-05/5:34 PM |
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| Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
14-Mar-05/5:33 PM |
A G Q X R Z T G G W T
s i q x u g g w w a a
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| Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle |
14-Mar-05/5:29 PM |
This is a bulging turnip.
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
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| Re: an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle |
14-Mar-05/7:14 AM |
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This is almost completely illegible. Is English your native language? (I hope not)
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| Re: The Because Collection by INTRANSIT |
14-Mar-05/6:51 AM |
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
12-Mar-05/10:11 AM |
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You are incompetent. Stop chasing rainbows and start chasing that elusive C minus in your English class. I would suggest you start by swallowing your teacher's bulbous bratwurst; it is your only real chance.
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| Re: bleeding by crooked_smile |
12-Mar-05/10:03 AM |
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| Re: Memories by RION12 |
12-Mar-05/10:02 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina |
11-Mar-05/7:17 AM |
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this thread of discussion has caused me to drop a plump in my trousers
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| Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina |
11-Mar-05/7:03 AM |
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LOL. Wish i had written that comment
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
10-Mar-05/3:16 PM |
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and it makes a difference if you want anybody to know what the fuck you are talking about.
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
10-Mar-05/3:15 PM |
whose "best solution"? whose approval? I don't see anyone suggesting a solution, nor anyone seeking approval. Verdict: Very Dim.
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| Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus |
10-Mar-05/10:46 AM |
how about "borne on her tears? "
I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more.
there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
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