Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	21-Mar-05/6:17 PM
Do you mean that you could care less, or that you couldn't care less? If it is the former, why not say, "I could care more?"
Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher	21-Mar-05/6:15 PM
Yahhh, Vee believes in nuhsink, Lebowski. You sink vee are kidding und making mit da funny schtuff?
Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT	21-Mar-05/6:49 AM
good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8	19-Mar-05/1:34 PM
funny that this is your highest ranked poem.
Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	19-Mar-05/1:20 PM
Novelty is overrated. Here, a story is being told and being told well. How original is it to die? Doesn't make the death of someone you love any less painful or important or novel. The writing is direct and concrete. It is written with both skill and emotional restraint, to the degree which is possible anyway. I can hear an argument that this is not poetry, and, as I am not really a poet, I would not argue. I would argue if one were to posit that this is not exemplary writing. It is.
Re: "America The Beautiful" by jroday	18-Mar-05/7:20 AM
I wanted to read your "what have you" but, as an American, I couldn't be arsed.
Re: Drinking before noon with Bukowski by Beyond_Dreams	17-Mar-05/7:40 PM
I thought this was good, right up until the last few lines.
Re: Memory by chocolate9009	17-Mar-05/7:36 PM
ROFLMMFAO
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/7:34 PM
you go girl. talk to the hand. kick em to the curb, and all that...
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/7:32 PM
It is funny, though, how you have taken it upon yourself to rewrite her comment so that it might make some sort of dildo sense to an Oprah addict dangling from Dr. Phil's cock. the loose, imprecise nature of her writing in this comment should have shown me that her exact words are not important...?? Please tell me you were joking when you wrote that. Then you go on to tell me that she meant something other than what I read in some language approximating plain English, because you are so much better equipped than I am to decode her? Fucking laughable. Absolutely pathetic.
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/7:20 PM
LOL. Nice dodge. If I am unable to make sense out of the parts, how can I determine what she is saying on the whole, short of making massive assumptions that may or may not be correct? How the fuck do you know what she means? Did she explain it to you privately? Are you one of those bible interpreters that changed "blessed are the poor" to "blessed are the poor in spirit"? Hmmmmm.... awfully strange that you think she is right about something that YOU inserted into her comment. What are the chances?
Re: a comment on JJ’s Church by Dovina	17-Mar-05/3:44 PM
she said pretzels.
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/3:37 PM
ummm. REad the comment that I replied to again, if you can muddle through it.
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	17-Mar-05/7:36 AM
do you know what the word "hackneyed" means? From this previous post, I would guess not. What exactly are you accusing Z of circumlocuting? Is he skirting some central point in order to avoid having to address it?
Re: a comment on Painting by RION12	17-Mar-05/7:24 AM
Mongoloids, too, think alike.
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/7:21 AM
"Hang in" Now, that is sound advice.
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	17-Mar-05/7:18 AM
ugh. What could this comment say about your "growth stage"? True strength is found in weakness? I suppose true growth is then found in non-growth? Where did you come up with your 90% figure? I suppose you fancy yourself one of the 10%. We, as sentient, adult beings, think in words. You think poorly. "90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are" You could not be more wrong about this.
Re: a comment on The Measurement by thepinkbunnyofdoom	16-Mar-05/2:53 PM
LOL. Yeah. I got that.
Re: a comment on JJ’s Church by Dovina	16-Mar-05/6:13 AM
what a loaf.
Re: The Measurement by thepinkbunnyofdoom	16-Mar-05/6:08 AM
Some sort of concrete imagery would not hurt this. I feel left out.